Over the weekend, I made a lot of tiny minor edits to all of the files. In other words, I searched for words marked with underscore characters and changed them to actual italicized words. Wow! The joys of using WordSmith! :)
I also started Wulf's comments on the paddling chapter, although I didn't get much done before it was time for the latest Come as Your Character Chat at Forward Motion
. This time, I came as Gorok, Wulf, Kensin, and
Bel. But I had competition as Lydia came as three characters! :) It really does help get a handle on characters and background...
On Monday morning, I put together a copy of the first chapter in preparation for the Fiction Writing Workshop. I wanted to give it to Matt before giving it to any of the others, for some reason (wink). This was also the first time I tried combining Wulf's journal entries with Gorok's POV. I don't know if it works yet, of course.