Yesterday, I brought Chapter One to work, in preparation for the Fiction Writing Workshop that afternoon. I checked in with the manager to make sure he still thought it was OK; he said he'd read the first few pages and didn't see anything wrong with it. Uh-oh, the real ... interesting ... stuff doesn't happen until later into the story.
Anyway, I went ahead and handed out the copies at the end of the Fiction Writing Workshop. Shudder, shudder, shudder. Wish me luck for next week, when we go over it in class! :-O