Last night, after finishing my "alpha beta soup," I did a few more edits on the mage duel/sensual bath chapter. I got up to the very beginning of the match. I also changed the scene so that Jupe is no longer the one taking bets on the match. It didn't make any sense as he kept shouting about how unfair the match was to Gorok and cheering Gorok along -- yet the odds against Gorok were incredibly high. I gave this job over to Danrig either, and that gave him another catty moment when he accidentally asks Wulf if he wants to bet on the match, apologizes, and then grins to show he's not sorry at all.