Last night, I did a fair number of edits, up to the time Gorok and Wulf went to the bath house on the island. (Bath house in the ancient style, not, like, San Francisco! ) Some of the description went a little slowly, and I had to post snippets in the FM chat and ask (plea) for help. But it all worked out. By the time I finished, I was up to the part where Gorok sees a mage trying to sneak up on him in the bath. I changed it so that he realizes the mage was trying to pee on him. When Gorok startled him... well, you can imagine the reaction.