Phew, I caught up with myself -- I've finished doing the edits for all the pages I had edited before the Palm screwed me over. Doing the edits for the paddling chapter was fun
. First, Kensin is paddled in front of all the mages as a punishment for betraying them. Then, Wulf ties Gorok to the bed for the first time. :)
And tonight, I finished most of the edits for the chapter where Gorok, Wulf, and Kensin fight with Rowena after they think they are safe from the shapeshifter. One new problem reared up. I realized that because of the structure of the point of view sections, the part where Wulf struggles to save Gorok from a brain injury comes after
the part where Gorok wakes up from his coma. Argh! So I had to move the part where Gorok wakes up to the final chapter, the wedding chapter. Then I realized this mean I went from Gorok's POV for waking up to Wulf's POV then back to Gorok's POV for the wedding (days later) then to Wulf's POV for the wedding. It probably would have worked, but it didn't reflect the structure I'd used before, so I ended up making those parts into two chapters.
So now when I do my next round of edits, I'll have to flip forward to the section where Wulf and Markulon work together to save Gorok from the brain injury, then return to the part where Gorok wakes up. Hope I remember!